WRIT1000 Assessment One - Project Proposal for 510051015
Field of interest
Nutrition Science
A question, claim, or statement you would like to explore:
"I tried this method! Lose 10kg in a week!"
"XXX diet pills make me lose weight successfully, come and check it out!"
"One meal a day, lose weight with me!"
Nowadays, weight loss has become one of the topics with the widest audience. No
matter what social media app you're on, you'll always see posts with weight loss
headlines, but I've also found a lot of horrible-looking headlines. As I listed earlier, it
looks appealing, but weight loss has such a wide audience that no matter what age group
they are in, they all have one worry - should I get thinner? Because of this, all kinds of
diets have emerged, and some have succeeded in reaching their goals as well as those
who have suffered serious illnesses because of using unhealthy diets to lose weight. So,
as someone who has also struggled with weight loss, I would like to delve into this and
try to come up with a healthy weight loss result. Similarly, I would like to urge everyone
that it is essential to choose a healthy weight loss method that suits you.
A citation from an equivalent article/report/paper within your field of interest
Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. “Losing Weight .” Centers for Disease
Control and Prevention, 19 Sept. 2022,
www.cdc.gov/healthyweight/losing_weight/index.html.
A description of what you hope your final piece of academic writing will be:
I chose the field of Nutrition Science for several reasons. First, because my major is
nutrition science, over a period, I have accumulated some knowledge about nutrition
science. Moreover, I am very interested in this field, and I search for related posts to
read after class. On the other hand, I think this field is very researchable. Nutritional
science is a topic that is very close to the daily life of human beings, and it has an impact
on every person's every day, so it is important to everyone. What I like most about this
field is the perfect combination of life and science. The word "science" always makes
people feel a bit distant and difficult to relate to everyday life. Nutrition is sometimes
too life-like to be convincing and not scientific enough. But when the two are combined,
a magical chemical reaction occurs, which is what I like most about the field of
nutritional science. What I want to improve on because this class gives me a great
opportunity to understand the field on a deeper level and most importantly teach me
how to better articulate my ideas better.
The issue I chose to research was about the importance of healthy weight loss, which is
a very relevant topic with a large audience. This is also a topic that I have always been
interested in. People love to pursue beauty and a perfect body is something everyone
wants to have. So, people start to try various ways to lose weight, but most of them are
not satisfactory, either not good enough to reach the goal, or because it is too difficult
to cause it is difficult to stick to it. There are even a lot of ways that have a lot of side
effects, and there are more and more ways that can be significantly harmful to your
health. That's why I wanted to write an article to introduce and promote healthy weight
loss for everyone.
I thought I could collect specialized research papers and collect the data and
experimental results within them as an argument. I chose to use more scientific
arguments to prove the scientific validity of my point. At the same time, I would like
to collect some of the weight loss methods that have been massively as well as coldly
used, and the intuition of people who have used them. From there, I will find out the
relatively easy and efficient ways to lose weight. Regarding how to prove the
importance of healthy weight loss, I would like to present both positive and negative
aspects. The positive effects of healthy weight loss and the serious results that result
from unhealthy weight loss. My main point is that healthy weight loss is very important
and healthy weight loss requires both diet and exercise. A good routine is equally
needed. Before becoming beautiful, you need to make sure that you are healthy first.
Healthy weight loss is also a way to maintain a healthy body and many diseases can be
alleviated by losing weight. For the structural aspect, my current idea is to first
introduce what is a healthy way to lose weight, list a few methods, and prove that they
are healthy and can be adopted in terms of nutrition and human science. Then list the
arguments I have found to prove that a healthy approach is important for weight loss.
Finally, I would like to write about the possible consequences of choosing the wrong
unhealthy way to lose weight, including the development of diseases. Thus, making the
essay more convincing.
The article aims to make the reader realize that wanting to lose weight is a good thing,
but you need to choose the right way to do it or else it can have a negative effect instead.
The audience for this article is all those who are thinking of losing weight or have tried
many ways but still have not reached their desired goals and have chosen the wrong
way. To provide them with some options.
This course helped me a lot and was an initiation for me to write my assignments. It
taught me how to express my ideas clearly and logically. I used to have no interest in
writing and felt that I couldn't write well. But with the help of this course, I am now
confident in my writing and am getting interested in writing. This is a very positive start
for me.