WANG Yuxin ProposalComment
Bachelor of Science (Honours) Scheme in Applied Sciences
SEHS4510 Integrated Study Marking Form

Proposal

Supervisor Name Ir Dr Joseph SO
Student Name WANG Yuxin
Student Number 20021951S
Grade Comments and Justification for Grade
PROJECT PROPOSAL
Clearly presented Title, Objective & Approach of the study.
B+
- The scope of the project is good and meaningful.
- Objectives & Approach of the study are clear. Should consider to
identify the current issues of analysing the participation pattern in
sports activities.
- While there is no theoretical model needed in the project, but the
more daily examples of significance of systems for sports activities
should also be considered.
- The project is really contributive when it can successfully get the
insights of pattern of participation.
- What are the source of data to be crawled? Can also consider
different age groups, gender, types of sports or other demograghic
information. More studies are expected on the need of the user
friendly interface and system..
- Information to be collected stated is sensible. The list of files should
Background of the study is well presented (SILO a).
Significance of the study or expected contributed clearly presented.
Free from spelling & grammatical errors. Appropriate writing style is
adopted.
Information to be collected is clear and action steps are incorporated.
Layout & format are consistent with the guidelines.
The work of others is acknowledged and referenced in accordance with
the APA method.
Supervisor Name Ir Dr Joseph SO
Student Name WANG Yuxin
Student Number 20021951S
Grade Comments and Justification for Grade
also show the sources.
- The references is not using APA style and some more updated
references should be cited.