MDIA2096-无代写
时间:2023-07-13
Focus on MDIA2096 assessment
tasks
‘feeding forward’
‘feeding forward’
 Formative feedback at a time when students can act on it
 20% A2 Poster
 10% A2 Commentary Part 1
40% A2 Commentary Part 2
30% A3 Essay
Overview of grades
 F = Fail 0-49%: Unsatisfactory performance against the criteria
 P = Pass 50-64%: Satisfactory / adequate performance against the criteria
 C = Credit 65-74%: Good performance against the criteria
 D = Distinction 75 -84%: Very good performance against the criteria
 HD = High Distinction 85-100%: Excellent / outstanding performance against the criteria
The grading cake
FAIL PASS CREDIT DISTINCTION HIGH DISTINCTION
FAIL
 Fail 0-49%: Unsatisfactory
performance against the criteria
 Work that may be well written but that
fails to make regular, significant, and
specific contact with course
concepts, required readings, and
materials
 Fails to meet the requirements – this is
not a cake
PASS
 Pass 50-64%: Satisfactory performance
against the criteria
 Adequate response to the
requirements
CREDIT
 Credit 65-74%: Good performance
against the criteria
DISTINCTION
 Distinction 75 -84%: Very good
performance against the criteria
The grading cake
FAIL PASS CREDIT DISTINCTION HIGH DISTINCTION
MDIA2096 Marking Moderation
 ADA Faculty Guidelines re Marking
 ARTS2096 Marking Moderation meetings and ongoing
coordination across the Teaching Team to ensure
consistency and fairness of grading
 All Fail results are confirmed by the Course Convenor
Weeks 3 – 9
MDIA2096
TOP TIPS FOR SUCCESS
 Come to tutorials prepared:
 Prepare the required readings
 Engage with the Lecture
 Bring your notes / questions / contributions
 Engage in tutorial activities and
discussions to deepen your learning on
the topic
 Prepare and write your Commentary
while your ideas are fresh
POSTERS on weekly
topics
COMMENTARIES on
weekly topics
Topics Date & Time Registration
Link
The secret of marking (and what to do
with feedback)
Wednesday 12 July, 2023
2:00pm-3:00pm
Register here
Keeping well while studying Thursday 13 July, 2023
2:00pm-3:00pm
Register here
10 ways to make your marker happy :) Thursday 20 July, 2023
2:00pm-3:00pm
Register here
Introduction to Endnote Thursday 20 July, 2023
2:00pm-3:00pm
Register here
How to write a great essay Monday 24 July, 2023
3:00pm-4:00pm
Register here
Referencing 101 Wednesday 26 July, 2023
2:00pm-3:00pm
Register here
Exam prep: Tips for smart study Thursday 27 July, 2023
3:00pm-4:00pm
Register here
Study Hacks Workshops
A2 Commentary on weekly topics
Feeding forward
Top tip
ALWAYS CAREFULLY CHECK
THE ASSESSMENT CRITERIA
PLAN YOUR WORK TO
CLEARLY ADDRESS EACH OF
THE ASSESSMENT CRITERIA
Assessment criteria
A2 Commentary on weekly topics
 The commentary demonstrates
understanding of the weekly topic
 The commentary focuses on a significant
concept, argument or example
addressed in the weekly topic
 The information presented is coherent
 The commentary demonstrates
engagement with the required readings
for the weekly topic in MDIA2096
 The commentary demonstrates
engagement with the required readings
 The commentary demonstrates
engagement with the lecture material
 The commentary demonstrates
originality
 The commentary makes a connection to
original example(s) or contemporary
issues
 The commentary engages with further
readings
 The commentary presents an original
argument or perspective
 The commentary demonstrates quality
of academic writing
 The writing is polished and clear
 The commentary has a logical structure
 The writing includes complete and
consistent academic referencing
Assessment criteria
A2 Commentary on weekly topics
 The commentary demonstrates understanding of the weekly topic
 The commentary focuses on a significant concept, argument or example
addressed in the weekly topic
 The information presented is coherent
Assessment criteria
A2 Commentary on weekly topics
 The commentary demonstrates engagement with the required readings for
the weekly topic in MDIA2096
 The commentary demonstrates engagement with the required readings
 The commentary demonstrates engagement with the lecture material
Assessment criteria
A2 Commentary on weekly topics
 The commentary demonstrates
originality
 The commentary makes a connection
to original example(s) or contemporary
issues
 The commentary engages with further
readings
 The commentary presents an original
argument or perspective
 TIP:
 Extend or further develop your
prior learning
 algorithms -> MDIA2096 focus on
platform values and tensions with
Public Service Media values
 commercial media / News Corp ->
MDIA2096 focus on platform values
and tensions with Public Service
Media values
Assessment criteria
A2 Commentary on weekly topics
 The commentary demonstrates quality
of academic writing
 The writing is polished and clear
 The commentary has a logical structure
 The writing includes complete and
consistent academic referencing
 TIP:
 Academic writing should include full, clear
and consistent referencing to acknowledge
all sources and demonstrate your reading
and engagement.
 Please provide full and complete intext
referencing even when paraphrasing - in
order to acknowledge all sources, to show
off your research and engagement, and to
provide strong support / evidence for your
own ideas.
 https://www.student.unsw.edu.au/referen
cing
Feeding forward: writing to criteria
 Writing to criteria
 Job applications
 Applying for funding, scholarships etc
 Tenders and pitching
 Demonstrated performance against criteria
 Writing to criteria – assessment tasks
 Understand the expectations and write for your reader
 Criteria are the recipe for success
 Carefully check the assessment criteria
 Plan your work to clearly demonstrate your very best work against the criteria
Writing to criteria - engagement
 Engagement IS
 Demonstrated understanding of required
readings
 Defining key terms with reference to the
required readings
 Critical analysis / critique
 Using the required readings as a shared credible
resource
 Identifying strengths and weaknesses
 Connecting / comparing with further credible
sources
 Offering alternatives that are supported by
scholarly research or evidence
 Using the required readings as a starting point or
reference point for your own work
 Engagement ISN’T
 Simple summary or simple description
 Parroting or repeating
 Uncritical agreement – you are welcome
to develop counter arguments and
critiques supported by scholarly sources
Online resource:
https://www.student.unsw.edu.au/critical-
thinking
REMINDER: Regular, significant, and
specific contact with the course concepts
and required readings is essential for all
assessment tasks in MDIA2096
Engagement
 HINT:
BEGIN your preparation for the assessment task with close attention
to the required reading(s)
Read closely
Highlight key concepts, quotable quotes, key arguments
Take notes – including page numbers for references
Identify the key concept(s) / argument(s) / example(s) that you will
engage with in your own written work
Focus and structure
 Focus
 less can be more
 identify a key issue / problem / example and discuss / analyse this in some detail and with
some nuance / complexity rather than list a number of key points without developing any
in a more substantial way
 Structure
 think beyond a loose collection of ideas – introductory and summing up sentences,
unfolding an argument
 1 idea per paragraph, well–developed
 Logical order / argument / sequence of ideas
 Avoid the ‘wall of words’
 Aim to start strong and end strong
Evidence and sources
 always provide evidence for the arguments or claims that you make
 Your argument carries more weight and has greater credibility when supported by
evidence and references to quality scholarly sources
 ensure that you use reliable and appropriate sources for academic writing. Reliable
and appropriate sources will primarily be academic or scholarly sources – particularly
peer reviewed journal articles or books published by an academic publisher.
 use journalist/media or commentary sources sparingly, if at all. Be sceptical and
critically analyse online sources that are not scholarly publications. Verify your sources
and select only sources where the authority and expertise of the author and publisher
can be well established
Evidence and sources
 News media and media commentary can be useful sources for current examples,
but you should not rely solely or primarily on media sources to support your
argument
 Aim to engage the highest quality sources available
 The Lecture is not a peer reviewed publication. Use the Lecture as a guide and
a prompt to assist your engagement with the required readings and further
materials. Do not rely on direct references to the Lecture to support your work –
instead go directly to the required scholarly readings
Examples
 An example can be very effective - to focus your writing and to
demonstrate your understanding of the topic
 Example(s) drawn from scholarly or media sources should be fully
acknowledged with intext referencing and in the Reference List
 The examples scholars use should be properly thought of as part of their
intellectual property re issues of plagiarism and academic integrity
 It is in unpacking an original example that an original critical perspective
might best emerge
Writing
 Academic writing
 Simple sentences best convey your meaning – verbosity obscures
 Careful word choice
 Explain / define key terms / key concepts in your own words, with reference to
the required readings
 Quality not quantity – avoid padding or rambling
 Avoid quote drops / quote bombs
 Integrate all quotes – explain / unpack / connect in your own words
 Demonstrate your own understanding in your own words
Beyond the basics
 Aim high!
 A title can be very effective to focus your writing and to engage and
orient the reader
 Focus on media and social justice
 Define / explain key concepts / key terms with reference to the required
readings. Explain why key concepts or issues are significant – why write
about this?
 Show off your reading and research with thorough intext referencing
 Beyond simple summary or description – foreground your voice and your
argument – why does this topic matter?
 Aiming for expertise beyond opinion
Draft, revise, polish
 Don’t stop at a first rough draft
 Allow ample time to draft, revise and polish
 Careful word choice, sentence construction, structure
 Avoid single sentence paragraphs
 Read your work out loud
 Ask a friend or family member to read
 Double-check the criteria
Referencing
More on referencing in coming weeks
 full and consistent referencing – intext as well as Reference List /
Bibliography
 Show off your research and engagement
 Demonstrate the support for your ideas
 Acknowledge all sources
 https://student.unsw.edu.au/referencing
Feeding forward ….
 Engagement with required readings
 Original ideas and independent research
 Full and consistent acknowledgement / referencing of all sources
 Key concepts / themes for MDIA2096 - focus on MEDIA and social justice /
human rights / ethics
 Social justice / human rights issues with a focus on the role and impacts of media
 E.g. role and impacts of media framing (climate change, protests, racism in media)
 E.g. role and impacts of media and communication technologies (hidden costs of AI,
implications of EdTech)
 Eg role and impact of media for human rights / social justice (gender and tech,
media and activism)
Feeding forward ….
 Beyond personal reflection
 personal reflection can be a good starting point but should never be the end point
 Avoid generalisations and sweeping statements
 E.g. ‘time will tell’
 E.g. ‘social media gives everyone a voice’
 Present your informed and expert opinion – supported with scholarly sources and
evidence
Feeding forward ….
• Provide full and complete referencing for all sources. Page numbers should be included
for direct quotes and for paraphrasing
• Demonstrate close and thorough engagement with the required readings. This means
that you should demonstrate that you have read closely and thought deeply rather than
relying on Lecture notes etc
• Define or explain all key concepts / key terms with reference to the MDIA2096 required
readings
Referencing
More on referencing in
coming weeks
https://student.unsw.edu
.au/referencing
Top tips on academic referencing and
writing for ARTS2096 Assessment Tasks:
 1. Check the assessment criteria and plan to address each of the criteria
 2. Acknowledge all sources with full intext referencing and a complete list of references.
Demonstrate your research and engagement with intext references whenever you draw
on someone else’s words, research or ideas
 3. Test your understanding on citing and referencing by taking the online quiz here:
https://www.monash.edu/rlo/research-writing-assignments/referencing-and-academic-
integrity/citing-and-referencing/test-your-understanding
 4. Work through the 4 online modules here: https://www.monash.edu/rlo/research-writing-
assignments/referencing-and-academic-integrity/citing-and-referencing
 5. Plan to draft, revise, rework and polish your writing
 6. Work with the excellent resources available online: https://student.unsw.edu.au/skills
 7. Book a consultation: https://www.student.unsw.edu.au/skills/contact
 8. Develop your ideas and skills by actively preparing for tutorials and actively
participating in the tutorials
Aim high and
show off your
best work!
A2 COMMENTARY PART 2
A3 ESSAY
“”
Resources and supports
are available
Use resources and supports early and often!
Supports and resources
• Consider reaching out to the Academic Skills team for 1:1 support and resources
for academic success.
• UNSW Student Support Advisors can assist with things like time-management.
• The UNSW Library has great resources, study spaces, and information on
referencing.
• The English Language Success page also offers a variety of resources and
support for building your English confidence and fluency.
• Contact Peer Mentoring: https://www.student.unsw.edu.au/peersupport
Topics Date & Time Registration
Link
The secret of marking (and what to do
with feedback)
Wednesday 12 July, 2023
2:00pm-3:00pm
Register here
Keeping well while studying Thursday 13 July, 2023
2:00pm-3:00pm
Register here
10 ways to make your marker happy :) Thursday 20 July, 2023
2:00pm-3:00pm
Register here
Introduction to Endnote Thursday 20 July, 2023
2:00pm-3:00pm
Register here
How to write a great essay Monday 24 July, 2023
3:00pm-4:00pm
Register here
Referencing 101 Wednesday 26 July, 2023
2:00pm-3:00pm
Register here
Exam prep: Tips for smart study Thursday 27 July, 2023
3:00pm-4:00pm
Register here
Study Hacks Workshops
Support for your
best work
https://student.unsw.edu.au/s
kills
Highly
recommended –
Academic Skills
One-to-One
https://www.student.unsw.ed
u.au/skills/contact
Special
Consideration
https://student.unsw.edu.au/s
pecial-consideration
Student support
advisors
https://student.unsw.edu.au/
advisors
A2 Commentary
(Part 2)  A2 Commentary Part 2 due Monday 31
July 10PM – 40%
 3 Commentaries on W3 – W9 topics
 3 x 500 words including all references
 No double up with Poster or A2 Part 1
 3 Commentaries compiled in one doc for
submission through Turnitin
Weeks 3 – 9
MDIA2096
TOP TIPS FOR SUCCESS
 Come to tutorials prepared:
 Prepare the required readings
 Engage with the Lecture
 Bring your notes / questions / contributions
 Engage in tutorial activities and
discussions to deepen your learning on
the topic
 Prepare and write your Commentary
while your ideas are fresh
POSTERS on weekly
topics
COMMENTARIES on
weekly topics
Thankyou!
TANJA DREHER
COURSE CONVENOR
MDIA2096
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